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	<title>Comments on: The best copywriting: so simple people won&#8217;t pay for it?</title>
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		<title>By: Michael Morrison</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-391</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Morrison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 17:38:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s a fine line huh? I&#039;ve always found that in cases like this, where you&#039;re simplifying text, a little bit of justification goes a long way. I employ the basic idea that you should educate clients as much as possible as (a) it obviously builds up trust between you and (b) it stops them calling with every little problem, saving them money and you time. 

Alastair has a good point though, some copywriters are wonderfully creative whereas others are anally astute; so perhaps best to play to your strengths and be honest?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s a fine line huh? I&#8217;ve always found that in cases like this, where you&#8217;re simplifying text, a little bit of justification goes a long way. I employ the basic idea that you should educate clients as much as possible as (a) it obviously builds up trust between you and (b) it stops them calling with every little problem, saving them money and you time. </p>
<p>Alastair has a good point though, some copywriters are wonderfully creative whereas others are anally astute; so perhaps best to play to your strengths and be honest?</p>
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		<title>By: Alastaire Allday</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alastaire Allday</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 May 2010 12:48:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just surfed on in from your comment on ABC Copywriting and I couldn&#039;t agree more with this post!

I wrote about &lt;a href=&quot;http://allday.cc/blog/employing-a-professional-writer/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;this problem back in January here&lt;/a&gt;, saying that &quot;I can wire a plug, but I don&#039;t think I&#039;m an electrician, just because you can write English, doesn&#039;t make you a copywriter.&quot;

You&#039;re completely right that the simpler something is, the more powerful it gets (usually). That&#039;s the theory behind minimalist writers like Raymond Carver, Bret Easton Ellis etc. 

But editing down isn&#039;t exactly the same skill as copywriting, is it? It&#039;s being a good editor. I&#039;ve known people who can edit but can&#039;t write, and who can write but can&#039;t edit.

If a good copywriter needs to do both, perhaps copy &quot;writer&quot; is the wrong term for what we do after all.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just surfed on in from your comment on ABC Copywriting and I couldn&#8217;t agree more with this post!</p>
<p>I wrote about <a href="http://allday.cc/blog/employing-a-professional-writer/" rel="nofollow">this problem back in January here</a>, saying that &#8220;I can wire a plug, but I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;m an electrician, just because you can write English, doesn&#8217;t make you a copywriter.&#8221;</p>
<p>You&#8217;re completely right that the simpler something is, the more powerful it gets (usually). That&#8217;s the theory behind minimalist writers like Raymond Carver, Bret Easton Ellis etc. </p>
<p>But editing down isn&#8217;t exactly the same skill as copywriting, is it? It&#8217;s being a good editor. I&#8217;ve known people who can edit but can&#8217;t write, and who can write but can&#8217;t edit.</p>
<p>If a good copywriter needs to do both, perhaps copy &#8220;writer&#8221; is the wrong term for what we do after all.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeff</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 20:40:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There is no sentence that cannot be made better through judicious editing. Including the one I just wrote.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is no sentence that cannot be made better through judicious editing. Including the one I just wrote.</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Locker</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-388</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben Locker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 15:23:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Innovative&quot;... yuck. I think part of the problem is that some people want the same stuff as everyone else. Saves them working out whether it&#039;s any good or not.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Innovative&#8221;&#8230; yuck. I think part of the problem is that some people want the same stuff as everyone else. Saves them working out whether it&#8217;s any good or not.</p>
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		<title>By: Lorraine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lorraine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 14:48:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, &quot;the greatest ingenuity lies in the simplicity of getting the message across with no apparent effort.”

Or as William Zinsser notes, &quot;A clear sentence is no accident.&quot;

But it&#039;s often tough convincing clients of this truism. I&#039;ve had clients ask for rewrites of superlative-free copy--or simply pencil in a load of &quot;innovative&quot; &quot;world-class&quot; words.

Sigh.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, &#8220;the greatest ingenuity lies in the simplicity of getting the message across with no apparent effort.”</p>
<p>Or as William Zinsser notes, &#8220;A clear sentence is no accident.&#8221;</p>
<p>But it&#8217;s often tough convincing clients of this truism. I&#8217;ve had clients ask for rewrites of superlative-free copy&#8211;or simply pencil in a load of &#8220;innovative&#8221; &#8220;world-class&#8221; words.</p>
<p>Sigh.</p>
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		<title>By: Good web copy is boring &#8212; Leon Paternoster</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-386</link>
		<dc:creator>Good web copy is boring &#8212; Leon Paternoster</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 13:31:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Locker explains how clients don&#8217;t value simple copy. I try and demonstrate its purpose to colleagues [...] </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Locker explains how clients don&#8217;t value simple copy. I try and demonstrate its purpose to colleagues [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Locker</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-385</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben Locker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 12:57:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Not quite Dom...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Not quite Dom&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Locker</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-384</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben Locker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 12:56:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Knowing what to cut is an art, especially if it&#039;s your own stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Knowing what to cut is an art, especially if it&#8217;s your own stuff.</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Locker</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-383</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben Locker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 12:56:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, the account handlers thing is true... then you have to remember the sage advice of Chesterton and Ogilvy that no-one erects statues to committees.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, the account handlers thing is true&#8230; then you have to remember the sage advice of Chesterton and Ogilvy that no-one erects statues to committees.</p>
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		<title>By: Ben Locker</title>
		<link>http://www.benlocker.co.uk/the-best-copywriting-so-simple-people-wont-pay-for-it/#comment-382</link>
		<dc:creator>Ben Locker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 12:54:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brilliant story...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brilliant story&#8230;</p>
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