Thursday 18th March, 2010
(Guest Post) Is copywriting evil?
There’s a famous scene in The Wire where hardened ‘stick-up boy’ Omar Little, giving evidence in a murder trial, has his character assassinated by slimy lawyer Maurice Levy.
‘You are amoral, are you not?’ says Levy. ‘You are feeding off the violence and despair of the drug trade… You are a parasite who leeches off the culture of drugs.’
‘Just like you, man,’ retorts Omar. ‘I got the shotgun, you got the briefcase. It’s all in the game though, right?’
Omar’s point is that everyone who is getting paid, by whatever route, is in the game. Even though rich, white-collar players may be distanced and insulated from the worst consequences of the game, they can’t pretend that those consequences don’t exist – or that they’re not partly responsible.
But what about those who got the pen? If commerce is a game, what kind of role is played by the copywriter? And is copywriting good or evil – or neither?
Fuel for misery
Recently, Jackie Ashley of the Guardian exhorted us to ‘take on the ads that fuel such waste, debt and misery’. Taking a paper by Compass as its starting point, her article argued that ‘those who manufacture our wants’ should be ‘reined in’. (Note how ‘reined in’ implicitly characterises marketers as animals.) She pointed to the problems caused by consumerism, debt and material desire, and endorsed calls for a ban on advertising in public places and ads aimed at children.
Most people can see both sides of this argument. On the one hand, a libertarian might argue that people are free to choose whether or not they buy things, and ultimately bear responsibility for their own actions and financial situation. And on the other, a sociologist might respond that the environment, including the marketing messages we see every day, plays a key role in shaping our behaviour – and, when we are young, perhaps even our character.
Infernal desire machines
Does marketing really manufacture desire? I suspect that many marketers would like to maintain that it doesn’t – while conducting their professional lives as if it does. If marketing couldn’t make people want things, would firms spend as much on it? Is it really true that marketing only caters for existing needs or, at worst, brings forth latent ones?
Apple is said to make ‘things you didn’t know you needed’, and that does seem to sum up the effect of its products. Before the iPad arrived, I didn’t sit around bemoaning the lack of a reading tablet that met all my demands. But once the iPad dropped, I started seeing myself using it – and wanting it, at least a little. The desire may not have been created ex nihilo, but it was definitely shaped and intensified by the product – and, crucially, the buzz generated around it.
The very existence of a discipline called demand generation seems to settle the argument, at least in some cases – marketing is as much about whipping up new desires as it is about satisfying existing ones. (Although the Apple Cube, a rare Steve Jobs fail, shows that even geniuses sometimes introduce products that their marketing machines can’t actually generate demand for.)
Emotion and reason
Within the broader marketing spectrum, what role is played by text? In other words, if marketing makes people miserable, how culpable is the copywriter?
I would argue that words play a crucial role because they can inculcate ideas. Sound, imagery and design are probably more immediately emotive, but they lose impact once we stop viewing the actual media in question.
Words, by contrast, have emotional impact coupled with the power of rhetoric and much more staying power. They can wheedle their way into our internal monologues, planting seeds in the unconscious that resurface once we’ve forgotten their source, masquerading as our own thoughts.
To have this persuasive power, words don’t have to be true – they just have to ring true. Think how often you have fulminated about a personal slight you knew was unfounded, or fretted over a pessimistic prediction that you knew was unlikely to happen. Words that chime with our emotional state or makeup can exert a powerful grip, even if they don’t reflect reality.
On top of emotion, the copywriter can use the power of reason to lead us from contentment to desire. Copy, particularly long copy, can break down our defences with entirely plausible, reasonable-sounding and ultimately compelling arguments. In the hands of the copywriter, an optional purchase can be made to sound essential.
Of course, we don’t have to do what the copywriter says, but we have to respond – even if only in thought. When we talk about ignoring someone’s words, we really mean not acting on them; once they’ve been heard, words cannot be forgotten or suppressed by will alone. Like it or not, the copywriter gets into your head.
Just following orders
So copywriting is a powerful tool. In the hands of a skilful persuader, it can redirect thoughts and emotions, eliciting a real-world action with something as insubstantial as words on a page. But should the copywriter be held accountable for the effect of their words on the audience?
Lawyers would respond that they are simply representatives – putting their client’s case in the best possible light so they get a fair hearing. Unfortunately, the argument that products and services somehow deserve a ‘fair hearing’ in the court of consumer opinion can only really be sustained on a metaphorical level. Marketers aren’t really advocates; they are manipulators. The best they can hope for is the Nuremberg Defence: ‘I was just following orders’.
No wonder Dante placed ‘flatterers’ – those who use language to exploit others – in the eighth circle of hell. ‘Dante did not live to see the full development of political propaganda, commercial advertisement, and sensational journalism, but he has prepared a place for them,’ commented Dorothy L. Sayers (an advertising alumna).
Standing on principle
So copywriters have to accept the ethical implications of their work. Mindful of this, some copywriters take a stance on who they will and won’t work with.
My host Ben Locker, in this post, puts politics, homeopathy and (reluctantly) tobacco on his ‘won’t promote’ list, while freely admitting he wouldn’t have a problem with guns, erotica or alcohol. Comments to the post mention religion, animal testing and lobbies (such as pro-hunting and anti-abortion) as other writers’ no-go areas. On his Q&A page, copywriter Mark Foster lists ‘cigarettes, armaments and nuclear power’ as his bêtes noires.
But is it as simple as steering clear of particular interests and industries? Once you dig a little deeper, many ‘bad’ products have a good side, and vice versa.
Ben admits to being a keen shooter, which is why guns get the all-clear – admirably, he refuses to hypocritically condemn a product that he enjoys himself. But there’s a moral case to be made for promoting guns too – they’re used to keep the peace and uphold the law, as well as wage war. And there’s the libertarian view, of course: guns don’t kill people – people do. Should the copywriter carry the can for what certain of his client’s customers do with their (legal) purchases?
False hope
In a follow-up post, Ben returned to the theme of homeopathy and the issue of selling ‘false hope’, as he put it. He quoted an article suggesting that homeopathic products had no effect, and that therefore marketers were at least not doing harm by promoting them.
But maybe there’s no need to feel guilty. As I observed in my comment to the post, placebos have been shown to be highly effective when patients believe in them, so you could argue that the copywriter is doing the consumer a favour by implanting the idea that homeopathic remedies are effective. For every product, there’s going to be a case for both sides – to promote or not to promote.
When it comes to representing lobbies or ethical positions that we don’t like, the position is perhaps clearer – although we could still play the ‘lawyer card’ and argue that everyone is entitled to representation, even if we don’t agree with their views. At the end of the day, it’s a personal choice.
Tangled web
Taking an ethical stance may be commendable, but setting up moral rules soon leads into some fairly grey areas – on the commercial side at least. It turns out that imposing a boundary on what’s ‘good’ or ‘bad’ is quite a challenge.
Here’s an example. I don’t eat meat. Let’s suppose I decide to bring that principle into my work, and turn down anything that involves killing animals for food. By that token, I’d probably decline an assignment for, say, a poultry farm. It’s fairly clear that the more business I drum up, the more drumsticks get churned out.
But should I promote a pie that contains meat? A restaurant that serves it? A retailer that sells it? A cookbook that tells how to cook it? Where does it end? Where do I draw the line and decide that, on this assignment, my keyboard is far enough removed from the abattoir to be in the clear? If everyone is culpable, can I really extricate myself from the tangled web, or drag myself up on to the moral high ground?
The truth is that every product or service has a harmful dimension, whether sociological, environmental, emotional or cultural. Whatever the copywriter is selling, it’s going to be hurting somebody or something somewhere. In many situations, we have to acknowledge that we’re making consumers suffer economic loss by buying a product that isn’t necessary, or adds no value. And if you accept that, then promoting any purchase that’s not strictly necessary is harmful. At the extreme, you could even argue that persuasively soliciting charitable donations from those unable to afford them does more harm than good, on balance.
Caveat emptor
Perhaps it’s best to keep away from abstractions and make our choices on a case-by-case basis. Although I don’t have any hard and fast rules, I do still consider myself to be reasonably ethical in my work. So I evaluate each assignment on its own merits, or try to. Since I have dependents, I’m probably lucky that I haven’t faced any really pressing ethical dilemmas.
In general, as you’d expect from a copywriter who blogged so enthusiastically about using weasel words, I think I tend towards the libertarian view of caveat emptor – buyer beware. It’s my job to promote as well as I can, and the audience’s job to resist or ignore me – if they can. At the end of the day, they’re not obliged to buy. That might not be a particularly moral position, but at least it’s consistent, and ‘professional’ in the very narrowest sense. So far, I can live with it.
Tom Albrighton is a freelance copywriter and founder/director of ABC Copywriting. ABC, based in Norwich, provides professional and creative copywriting services to businesses and agencies throughout the UK and Europe. Specialities include B2B marketing, SEO copywriting, website writing, articles and academic copywriting.


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I think copywriting is responsible for pillaging a lot of the English language. Many words that have traditionally had significance and value as ‘real’ words (i.e. – passionate) have been used, almost omnipotently to represent thin, hollow marketing promises. Some of these words have become so devalued through marketing overuse, they have lost the weight of their original and intended meanings.
Our mercenary culture has led us to be more absorbed and controlled by commercialism. Many of us have been taught to sideline anything that seems to have little financial value and focus only on things which cost or can make money. Unfortunately, we now live in a society where the majority of people’s desires have a price tag.
Comment left by Aaron on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 11:46 am
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Thanks Tom, interesting post.
Overall, I take the view that copywriting is not art, it’s commerce. I’m there to maximise the sales of my clients’ products. Is this about manufacturing need and desire? Yes. Will I use every trick in the book to do this? Again, yes – that’s the skill I bring to the party. I’ve spent an inordinate amount of time learning about how people think, how they change their minds, what affects their behaviour. These are easily as important as whether I can use a semi-colon correctly.
However, I will not lie about the products themselves or mislead people over their benefits. Not only is that unethical, it’s not good business either – in the long run it will harm my clients’ success.
Words are powerful things. Like others you mention, there are some products I will not work on. My own list is tobacco, religion, pharma and products aimed at children. I also teach my own daughter to see through the hype. (Adbusters is a great resource for this.)
But, in the same breath, the copy we write (no matter how good) is just one influence among many. Peer pressure rules. Culture is very important. And context can radically affect customer perceptions. So we can’t take all the glory or all the blame.
Thanks again for the post.
Comment left by Jason Ball on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 1:10 pm
Is copywriting evil? No! We can “nudge” people to think or behave in certain ways, but we can’t force them to do what they don’t want to do. And our clients have a right to communicate their messages – we help them do that effectively.
Comment left by Kay Ross on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 1:15 pm
It depends. I agree that as I’ve been learning copywriting I sometimes have qualms (and it’s partly why I’m tending toward b2b). I think the best copywriting just says things in a way that the person reading/listening can hear them.
Is life insurance evil? It depends on how much money you have, how much you buy, and whether your spouse just died leaving you with one income, no childcare, and two kids under the age of 5.
But unless the salesman, or the salesletter written by the copywriter, paints a vivid picture of the second option the couple with the two kids and the tight budget is going to be saying – you want me to spend $80/month on something I can’t see or touch and if I buy it we won’t get to enjoy our weekly evening out without the kids? Yeah, right.
In other words, I fall under the “neither” category. It’s a tool. And if you wouldn’t be willing to recommend the product to your close family member or best friend if they were an ideal candidate to buy it, then it might be time to seriously consider how badly you need the money. There is rarely a dichotomy when it comes to ethics.
Comment left by Beth Robinson on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Tom, great post as always.
When it comes to professional ethics, I think the copywriter who does bad work for a benevolent cause is more culpable than one who does excellent work for a morally-dubious cause he or she believes in.
I suppose you have to ask yourself a simple question: “Would I (or my family) use this product or service?”
On that basis, I would have no objection to writing copy for Glaxo, Smith & Wesson, Plymouth Gin and so on.
Similarly, I wouldn’t want to promote infant formula, intensively-reared chicken or the New Statesman – but I have no moral objection to people who do (whatever I happen think of those products).
David Ogilvy always made a point of being a customer of his clients. He wore their clothes, drove their cars and so on. That’s the approach I admire the most.
Comment left by Ben Locker on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 1:59 pm
Excellent post–and a subject that’s weighed heavily on my mind since I read Seth Godin’s Linchpin with its critique of consumer culture.
Some ethical decisions are black and white. I’m always quick to let people know I stopped working for a client when I learned his company sold dangerous pesticides.
But as you so lucidly note, other cases are less clearly delineated. I would include pharma clients in this gray area. Pro: Life-saving medications, health, hope. Con: Medical monopolies, animal testing, multimillion dollar political lobbies.
And here’s a less overt conflict I face continuously and have come to see as an ethical issue: The client who wants me to write puffery that flatters his organization, a C-level executive or a (often undifferentiated) product or service—-with little or no effort made to serve customers.
As you note, decisions must be made case by case. But I am feeling increasingly uneasy about compliantly churning out persuasive copy for questionable intents.
I guess the answer lies in seeking out more like-minded clients. And walking away from work–not an easy proposition in the current economic climate.
Comment left by Lorraine on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 3:03 pm
I’m no stranger to the irony of the fact that I rant and rave at the television courtesy of my loathing of so many condescending or manipulative adverts (mostly the beauty ones) – and yet this is the very industry I work in.
I think you just have to decide on a case-by-case basis and hope that you don’t wake up one day with a grinning Lucifer waving your soul in front of you.
Comment left by Rowena on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 8:19 pm
Oh, and it does truly sadden me that Bill Hicks thinks I should kill myself…
Comment left by Rowena on Thursday 18th March, 2010 at 8:20 pm
“But as you so lucidly note, other cases are less clearly delineated. I would include pharma clients in this gray area. Pro: Life-saving medications, health, hope. Con: Medical monopolies, animal testing, multimillion dollar political lobbies.”
@Lorraine
Those cases would all work the same way. Advertising with any more persuasion than “Here’s my product. Seems like something you might like”, is slimy. The customer needs to be the judge. Also slimy is “here’s my product to help you make lots of money (off of telling someone else HE can make alot of money, who will tell someone ELSE….blah blah)”. It’s Ponzi all the way. Selling a product is about making money for yourself, and you have no idea whether it will work for someone else, so keep it real. Present the facts. Pros and cons. Both sides.
Let’s use meds as an example. “Life saving medications”. meant for high-risk groups, are administered to low risk patients all the time to make a buck. The drugs are pushed on a bunch of doctors who buy the bull since they’ve been pumped full of medical content-without-the-context type knowledge. So they give nasty stuff like Lipitor to patients based on the Number Needed to Treat, or NNT. The flip side is Number Needed to Harm, NNH.
There were double blind studies (test group -low risk- took Lipitor for their HBP, control group took nothing for their HBP)that took place over several years and showed this: The number of people in the group taking Lipitor who died as a complication of either the meds or their BP problem was GREATER than the number of people in the control group who died.
Advertisers are the ones who tell half the story, leaving information like this out.
Would people die uselessly like this if we did everything as pure science instead of a big game of Monopoly?
I say we break through the bull and find out.
Comment left by Stella on Thursday 28th October, 2010 at 3:59 pm